Once upon a time there was a boy named Jack that liked drawing and that’s all he did,
one day. He Stumbled across a oddly looking rock that was in the spot that he
wanted to sit in, but he was oddly confused because he was the only person who
came to this tree.
one day. He Stumbled across a oddly looking rock that was in the spot that he
wanted to sit in, but he was oddly confused because he was the only person who
came to this tree.
So he threw the rock away off into to the distance, and suddenly he got teleported into
a different dimension and suddenly he saw a! Giant monster but for some reason he
wasn't scared he recognised it and realised that it was one of his drawings and it
talked! And said “hello Jack!” and jack suddenly fainted! And woke up 35 minutes
later.
And the monster said are you ok you past out about 35 minutes ago then Jack said
loudly how do I get home!. The monster said you have to find the rock you threw so Jack went
off the find the rock he threw he searched and searched but couldn't find it there was a lot of rocks
on the floor then he kicked a rock and it was the rock he threw and was teleported back to his
dimension and then he straight away started drawing about his crazy adventure
a different dimension and suddenly he saw a! Giant monster but for some reason he
wasn't scared he recognised it and realised that it was one of his drawings and it
talked! And said “hello Jack!” and jack suddenly fainted! And woke up 35 minutes
later.
And the monster said are you ok you past out about 35 minutes ago then Jack said
loudly how do I get home!. The monster said you have to find the rock you threw so Jack went
off the find the rock he threw he searched and searched but couldn't find it there was a lot of rocks
on the floor then he kicked a rock and it was the rock he threw and was teleported back to his
dimension and then he straight away started drawing about his crazy adventure
kia ora Jayden
ReplyDeleteYour writing is great and good.It look's to me that it's a tale like a story,What I mean is that how it's like the same as jack and the magic beans.Next time add a task writing down the bottem so your readers want to know a little about this story Ok.
Keep is up jayden ; )