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Monday 27 August 2018

My poem

I have only myself to blame
I am the reason why im tired all day
Need to go to my bed need to go to sleep 
I am so tired goodnight

This poem was made with the help of William 


























 

5 comments:

  1. Hey Jayden, I really enjoyed reading your poem.I like how you started to rhyme at the beginning of your poem.My advice to you would be to try extend it a little bit more but other then that keep up the good writing.

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  2. Hi jaydan I really enjoyed reading your poem but it was just the start.

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  3. Hi Jayden even though your poem is short It still talks about yourself really like your poem.

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  4. Hey Jayden I really enjoyed reading your poem I hope to hear more from you

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  5. Malo Jayden, Another amazing poem that i have read really enjoy the way you and william put this poem together. Just as some advice maybe you and william could try and add some rhyming words in it just to keep your readers hooked in. Amazing poem keep the hard work up.

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