Tuesday, 9 August 2016

Jayden Mascot

The monkey has a long long tail and legs and pointy ears and he is the olympics games mascot  and he looks cool. And it has the cool Rio Olympics logo. And it has long long legs and very very big toes. And he lives in a very cool tree house.

1 comment:

  1. Jayden, you have given some good details about the mascot in your paragraph. However, I would really like you to read over your work to check for capital letters, and to make sure you hae your sentences properly marked with full stops. Also, I would love to see you have a little more pride in your work and not just rush at the end to complete it.