Informational Writing

Perspectives and Opinions

                
WALT: Finding out the opinion of others and developing my own. What does the author want me to see, feel and believe?

My visual Mihi

Hi this is my visual mihi it explains what I like And what I believe in hope you enjoy.

Three ways to be a good role model

Hi and welcome to my writing and today I would explaining three ways on being a good role model.


A good way to be a good role model is by treating everyone the way you would like to be treated and Remember the little kids look up to you and if you do any silly things the little kids will copy you too.


Another way to be good role model is respecting everyone and respecting rules.


A third way to be a good model is by having a good behaviour all the time so you can set an example for other people.


And there it is! , three ways to be a good role model. Hope you learnt something from this article and maybe you should try some of these one day.

The kid under the tree

Once upon a time there was a boy named  Jack that liked drawing and that’s all he did,
one day. He Stumbled across a oddly looking rock that was in the spot that he
wanted to sit in, but he was oddly confused because he was the only person who
came to this tree.

So he threw the rock away off into to the distance, and suddenly he got teleported into
a different dimension and suddenly he saw a! Giant monster but for some reason he
wasn't  scared he recognised it and realised that it was one of his drawings and it
talked! And said “hello Jack!” and jack suddenly fainted! And woke up 35 minutes
later.


And the monster said are you ok you past out about 35 minutes ago then Jack said
loudly how do I get home!. The monster said you have to find the rock you threw so Jack went
off the find the rock he threw he searched and searched but couldn't find it there was a lot of rocks
on the floor then he kicked a rock and it was the rock he threw and was teleported back to his
dimension and then he straight away started drawing about his crazy adventure

How to be a good learner

This is where you make your statement.  Be clear on what the focus of your explanation is.

A good learner - eats well to keep good energy levels and to be focused.
 It’s been proven that healthy means a healthy mind to learn.
You start off by having a good and healthy breakfast so you can work well throughout the day  
and if its a hot day make sure to take off your jacket so you don’t get grumpy and frustrated.

A good learner makes sure he or she gets enough rest.
 Make sure to go to sleep early and have a good sleep so you can be up and
ready to learn the next day. Sleep is the number 1 thing you need for a good day at school.

A good learner is well prepared.   Being ready with all your gear to learn is important
   Pre pack everything before you go to sleep, stuff like putting your chromebook on charge
(We use chromebooks at our school) pre packing your lunch and leaving it
in the refrigerator and put your school uniform somewhere close to you.

And the last of all drink lots of water before a test so you are hydrated so learn!.

There you have it readers.  To be a good learner you need to follow these steps.
- 4 steps to help you do the best at your test

Teachers strike day

Did you know that this week on Wednesday, around New Zealand is strike day?

‘’Teachers want to have more time to teach students, instead of doing paper work all day.  Teachers want more time to teach their kids but their to busy doing work for the government!

Also students need resources for their learning, meaning that kids need help with their behaviour because they can’t control how they act. 

Did you know that teachers don’t get paid much? That’s why most people don’t want to be teachers. Every teacher wants to get a better pay!Well my partner and I agree that teachers should get paid more, have more time teaching students and helping unbehaving students to control how they act.

How to have fun in the holidays

Have you ever thought man I wish could play outside a day well there is a way to do that read the rest of my writing to find out how to do that.


One thing for sure is that mum and dad will have a list for us kids to work through. It’s the list of chores! At first were like dumb i don't wanna do chores. Then they say when your finished
your chores you can play with your friends outside or play the ps4/xbox.
Then you want to do your chores.




Another fun activity that doesn’t cost - is simply hanging out with your neighbours and friends for a bit of backyard (or front yard) sport.Like rugby or soccer it’s really fun and funny.



A final idea I want to share is how to make your online gaming time a bit more fun.Well if your like me i don't live with my brother so i’m the only child in the house if your not and you have siblings you take 20 minute turns one person will be playing then the other two will be playing outside.


So there you go - some good ideas to try out in your next school holiday. Remember do the chores then play you never know your mum and dad might let you play on the ps4/xbox longer than usual.

Jayden CHECKING SENTENCES

WALT:identify and write complete sentences.
So all the changes I made are highlighted blue It was a fun activity.
Hope you enjoy this blog post.

Picture book

I want to go look for a good planet for the future because the earth is dying.

The rocket was and red and black rocket it was very fast then all of us said 5 4 3 2 1 blast off!!!!!.

Then we went to mercury he got out of his rocket and said It's too hot here. O now I remember it's the closest planet to the sun. off to the next planet!.

Venus is the second planet from the sun Its too hot for me I don't need to go there off to the next planet!.

Now where going past earth It looks very fun but we not know about the planet . Off to the next planet!.

We landed on mars the 4th planet from the sun It has to many volcanoes off to the next planet!.

Jupiter is the 5 planet from the sun you can not stand on Jupiter off to the next planet!.

Saturn is the 6 planet from the sun we can't stand on Saturn to off to the next planet!.

Uranus is the second to last planet from the sun it's too cold for me to the next planet!.

Uranus is the second to last planet from the sun it's too cold for me to the next planet!.

Neptune is the last planet from the sun it is also to cold off back to earth!.

Well I was wrong earth is really the best planet for me. and I miss my family and friend and I missed earth

My post card to earth

Today I was finished doing my postcard to mars and I was writing a letter to my friend king

6 facts about spiders

1.did you know There are around 40000 different species of spider in the world.

2.Most spiders make silk which they use to create spider webs and capture prey.

3.Hundreds of years ago, people put spider webs on their wounds because they believed it would help stop the bleeding. Scientists now know that the silk contains

vitamin K, which helps reduce bleeding.

4.The venom of the black widow spider attacks nerves by blocking their signals to the muscles, which causes the muscles to contract repeatedly and often painfully. Black widow bites can also cause other nerve-related problems, such as high blood pressure, restlessness, and severe facial spasms.

5.Giant Huntsman spiders have leg-spans of around 30cm

6.Spiders eat more insects than birds and bats combined.

food web

mosquito

The mosquito is an annoying insect. The female flies around looking for a human target to sink her stinger into. After she has sucked your blood like a vampire, she leaves behind a red itchy bite.

Cinquain poem about camp

chicken flavoured worms

Walt: write quality introductions.

Have you ever tasted chicken flavoured worms. well Mr Goodwin is so insane he gave use chicken flavoured worms i think he might of had too much coffee today.I didn't no this would this ever happen.

Task description: In this lesson we did a writing experience to do with eating chicken flavoured noodles and pretending it to be worms

Jayden bust that myth

Jayden Motat Poster

Jayden Motat Trip 2016

On Tuesday the year 5s went to Motat. And then explored and itwas fun on the bus cause we sang songs and did hit the high note.Then we had  we went to go explore for an hour.We went to all the places and took photos or did the mannequin challenge.it was so fun. The best part was playing games and hanging out with my friends.

It is so fun

Go there

   

Jayden Writing Narrative

Start Writing Here: once Pone a time there was a boy named Cent and he was kayaking one day his father Clevelyn told him he can kayaking as long and as far as he wants but do not go in the tunnel but Kent never listened to his dad.so as he went kayaking he sore the tunnel and Kent thought about what his dad said but he didn't listen so he went Kent went in to the tunnel.

When Kent looked up in the tunnel he sore one thousand red eyes looking down at him. But Kent still went thru the tunnel because he wanted to see where it led then it was late he took a paths he didn’t no where to go.

His dad clevelyn went outside and he shouted Kent again he shouted Kent then he go worried something happened to him he ran as fast as a a lepard to the tunnel he Just spotted Kent's necklace. And then he went in the tunnel with his torch and his kayak shouted Kent Kent where are you and then Kent said over here dad he shore him and then they when home.                                                         

Hope you liked it :)